Tuesday, March 20, 2012

DWP - Prompt : Tumbling

In academy she was set apart

     Colonel Chloe Rayne is very smart

          She has a strong and devoted heart

               And displays authority from the start

               To think her weak would be a mistake

          For surely your arms she’d break

     Her combat skills are the best

She has beaten all the rest

But on this particular morning

     Her face carried a distinct warning

          The boots on her feet were not yet tied

               Adding a stomping type noise to her stride

               Her bun was loose, blond curls sent tumbling

          And about the frigid cold she was mumbling

     Laughing aloud most would not advise

Irritating an officer is not very wise

1 comment:

  1. you rhyme really well.
    i agree, i love the visual effect of the wave of words, it adds to the rhythm.