In academy she was set apart
     Colonel Chloe Rayne is very smart
          She has a strong and devoted heart
               And displays authority from the start
               To think her weak would be a mistake
          For surely your arms she’d break
     Her combat skills are the best
She has beaten all the rest
But on this particular morning
     Her face carried a distinct warning
          The boots on her feet were not yet tied
               Adding a stomping type noise to her stride
               Her bun was loose, blond curls sent tumbling
          And about the frigid cold she was mumbling
     Laughing aloud most would not advise
Irritating an officer is not very wise
 
 
 
you rhyme really well.
ReplyDeletei agree, i love the visual effect of the wave of words, it adds to the rhythm.